2009年3月17日 星期二

090317 Feedback for prepared speech

Jenny:
1. Take away the "plot" part. eliminate the "I don't want to deprive you the joy of..."
2. For the movie,take away the "Texas chainsaw massacre", replace with sth more relate to "Monk": ex. 7 years in Tibet, Bulletproof Monk.

Ben:
1. Pause before start to play the fortune telling part to attract audience's attention.
2. When playing the fortune telling part, say everything slower and clearer to ensure that everyone can hear you.

Omega:
1. Dress formally in the contest.
2. Practice more. Need to make it more fluent.

Anne and Hollie:
Deliver your speech in front of other audience other than TM members.

Helen:
Add more impact and slow down/enlarge your gestures.

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